Wednesday, June 11, 2014

His Dream Girl

He looks for you, frantically,
and searches for you in the dark.
Oh the pain of not finding you,
knowing, you are around.
A fortnight ago, he met you,
and still remembers you from then.
It was a goodbye but there was some hope.
He is still hopeful as he tries
to draw you on the sand again.
His memory is fading
and so wants to see you again.
But tell me how do I tell the lover in me,
I don't dream anymore.

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Oh! heart-touching.
I believe we must not lose our dreams...
1 reply · active 573 weeks ago
Thanks for commenting. I agree dreams are meant to shine even in the darkest hours! :)
Yeah agree with Anita this sure is touching...but you know what i read this long time ago when i was in my teens...if you love someone, set it free. If it comes back it's yours and if itdoesn't it never was.
i hope it's painful but i'm sure this too shall pass.
You have a gift good wishes for that...keep penning your pearls and remember nothing really gets wasted. Nothing...
loved the touching sweet composition.
1 reply · active 573 weeks ago
Thanks a lot for your kind words!

Like you said, nothing goes wasted an nothing shall ever!
Don't ever stop dreaming :)

Lovely little poem :)
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